Week+3+Activity

Writing Exercises
**Text 1 : Original: Decisions about strategy are held by the President in the President's Office.**
 * Practice 1: Rewrite the following texts to make them more concise.**


 * Text 2 : Original : There is a requirement for monthly testing of both treated and untreated samples for the determination of contaminant levels. The sample testing and data analysis are carried out by our Chief Security Technician. **


 * Text 3: Original : We regret to inform you that enrolment cancellation, which is not the same as course rescheduling, cannot be addressed via email transmissions and must be handled in person. Enrolment cancellation is handled at our office in Shenton Way. **


 * Practice 2: Rewrite the following texts to make them more objective.**


 * Text 1: **

// Rewrite, omitting exaggerated or boastful language. //


 * Since its brilliant beginning at a top-rated international laboratory, the World Wide Web, or the graphical and interactive side of the vast and complicated network of networks known as the Internet, has swept the computing world, and indeed, the whole world of business, like a tidal wave. The Web wows end users because it offers such incredibly intuitive technologies as fast and accurate searching, hypertext navigation, and instantaneous connection with information in almost every country in the world. // (78 words) // **